11 PAŹDZIERNIKA 2014
I LIVE IN A DETACHED HOUSE.MY HOUSE IS QUITE BIG AND BEAYTIFUL.IN MY HOUSE THERE ARE 3 ROOMS DOWSTAIRS AND 3 ROOMS UPSTAIRS.THERE ARE ALSO 2 BATHROOMS AND 1 KITCHEN.MY ROOM IS ON THE FIRST FLOOR.I LIKE ROOM BECAUSE IT'S COMFORTABLE AND VERY LIGHT.I USUALLY HAVE MES IN MY BEDROOM.THE. BEDROOM OF MY PARENTS IS SMALLER THAN MINE.THIS ROOM IS OLD-FAASHIONED, BUT IT HAS A BALCONY.MY BROTHER HAS GOT HIS ROOM, TOO.THERE ARE BLUE SHELVES, A BLUE DESK AND A BLUE BED.THE KITCHEN IS BIGGER THAN MY PARENT'S ROOM.THERE ARE A LOT OF CUPBOARDS, A FRIDGE, A COOKER, A SING,A SMALL TABLE AND 4 CHAIRS.NEXT TO THE KITCHEN THERE IS DINIGE ROOM WITH A BIG TABLE AND 6 CHAIRS.ON THE FLOOR THERE IS A DARK CARPET.THE LIVING ROOM IS THE BIGGEST ROOM IN MY HOUSE.I LOVE SPEADING TIME IN THIS ROOM.WE LIKE OUR HOME VERY MUCH.
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